英語作文批改評語1

一、 宏觀性評價

1.整體印象類評語

Super！Excellent！Perfect！Wonderful！Fantastic！Marvelous！

采用整體印象類評語對于起始階段學生有較好激勵作用，但若千篇一律使用此類評語，就會使學生無法正確認識自己寫作水，最終導致教師評語失去應有作用。

2.規范導知類評語

Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.

You’re careful of using pronunciation.

Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.

I’m expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time. You’d better pay more attention to word order.

Better be more careful of your spelling.

It’s important to compose a graft beforehand.

3.情感調控類評語

I apPciate your handwriting.

You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.

You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.

You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.

I’m expecting greater progress from you in writing .Come on.

If you need my help,never hesitate to come to me.

警句：

Hard work leads to success.

Not to advance is to go back.

No one is without faults.

Keeping is harder than winning.Keep it up.

二、 微觀寫作技能方面評語

1.專項點撥類評語

It’s proper to use the proverb in Para.2 quite clever.

You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.

The “struck” sentence is perfectly used.

You’d better use “third person” in the first para.

It’s good to use the past tense in your writing.

2.佳句欣賞類評語

教師可以在句尾統一標注贊美性符號（如E—Excellent）或標識不同星級等。

What a wonderful sentence using “cover”.

It’s really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.

The inverted sentence is well wtitten.

3.謀篇布局類評語

A good beginning.

A perfect ending.

Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.

The first para. makes a good beginning.

The last para. makes a perfect ending.

All the points have been covered.

It’s clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. It’s wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.

You are good at developing para.

You have made great progress in developing passage.

I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.

Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences. It’s really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.

在起始年級應側重對學生寫作行為規范引領，重在對學生進行詞語方面引導；對高年級學生則應側重對文章結構、行文邏輯、句子變化等方面指點和引導。

雖然這些評語對我們大部分學生來說不太適合，以為他們連老師評他們什么都看不懂，但我們時對作文批改確實沒做到這么仔細，有很大啟發。

英語作文批改評語2

1、You are an honest and hardworking girl. You leave me a very deep imPssion. No pains, no gains. I hope you will make more progress in English study in the future.

2、You are an excellent boy. I apPciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

3、You are a handsome boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you a glorious future.

4、You are an earnest girl and dutiful on your job. Thank you very much for your assistance on my teaching. I hope you can make more progress in your handwriting. Wish you a splendid future.

5、You are an active and passionate girl. I apPciate your participance in class activities. Wish you a happy life.

6、You are a very careful girl. Your handwriting is a marvel of neatness and order. I am sure there is nothing difficult for you to overcome.

7、You are a clever girl. I apPciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

8、You are a humorous boy. You may have some difficults on English, I hope you will make more progress in later day.

9、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.

10、You are an open-minded boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you make more improvement on English study.

11、You are a hardworking girl. You have a gift for English study. Where there is a will, there is a way. Wish you a fantastic future.

12、You are a straight-forward boy. I apPciate your creativeness on class. I hope you can make more improvement on your handwriting in later day.

13、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.

14、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.

15、You are an honest boy. You are good at running and jumping. Wish you be a superstar in the near future on Olympics.

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